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Altermeta - Escape by Noben Altermeta - Escape by Noben
My webcomic is called Altermeta.
I updated it today. Enjoy. ^^


This is T-square. She's fun to comic about, with a lot of deep history that I can't wait to show.
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There are no words on this page mainly because they are unnecessary, and it tells a story with vivid emotions even though there's no dialogue to tell what's on their minds. Of course a top-down drive across sunny stretches of road is one of the most liberated little things that need to be enjoyed in life. And with T-square always being bitter to drive away from aggravations like Ruth, being away from him in a very comfy spot calls for a much-needed moment towards just sitting back and enjoying the pleasantness of freedom.
As for me, I really like how you framed each panel almost perfectly. The scenery seems so honest that I found myself associating the wholes of the panels with places in real life that I can relate to, like the modern-day suburbia, the random jet stream painted on the huge patch of sky, and even the size of the car and the road they're driving on.
There's only a few tiny things that bug me, though. The back bumper in panel two looks a little stunted, and I can't put my finger on what that corner of black frame in the last panel is connected to.
What do you think?
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Dragon-Furry Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
Awesome work as always. Love the setting for the strip. Also that car... LOVE IT! :love:
AMTRAK Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Good one here.
temporos Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So does that mean you'll finally give me Wi-Fi access on-board the Pere Marquette so I can read it during the trip? <_<

Who am I kidding? We still don't have even working electrical outlets. >_< The passenger cars are from the '40s.
AMTRAK Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
Nods to that.
nickworcester Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Very nice scene. :D
Bambi-Rabbit Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Hopefully T-Square can find some bad guys to beat up. Destroying ninja's is a part of her history indeed.
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March 19, 2013
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