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Altermeta - The Rum Wench Brigade by Noben Altermeta - The Rum Wench Brigade by Noben
Altermeta is my webcomic, it's kind of about sex, dragons and rock & roll, but right now it's about dragon-ninja-pirates with rum, and that's okay with me. Dragons.

www.altermeta.net

Go read it, and if you like it, tell your friends. If you don't like it, tell your friends.
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:iconnickworcester:
First of all, I've got to put something out there... Sasha's ass = awesome. :la:

Second of all, it's the Rum Wenches. They're almost like the cheerleaders for T-square's swash-buckling crew, so they've got the epic montage entrance complete with various yummy close-ups of their money-makers and whatnot. Excellent panel transitions, hard-hitting final panel with the little sarcastic whisper by our beloved Sasha.

The detail that bothers me the most is how the ringleader wench's mug tray is obscured weirdly by the panel two shots ago. Otherwise, I'm wondering where Sasha got a hat after panel 1 (in which he doesn't seem to have one).

But otherwise... excellent way to freshen up the pace of the story. Kudos FTW T&A.
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colliewolf2010 Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you got to feel sorry for sasha... almost :evillaugh:
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:iconlupinetiger:
Hmm, would the continuity error be maybe one girl (CC) and probably two guys (Sasha and his friend?)?  Dunno why, but I was thinking of the picture where his friend caught Sasha on a pole hanging upside down ^.^
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:iconosbola:
Top panel looks like it has the makings of a future ęsthetic for video games.
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:iconosbola:
(Specifically the way it works both when scaled and with the lines visible like here, I mean)
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:iconcombak:
You know this is a fantasy when...
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:iconjclv:
Is the "continuity error" that the busty one's tray switched from her right hand to her left?
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:icongrimcw:
Thats CC.
and maybe she passed it off to cheer with her good arm?
:p
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:iconmerrypaws:
Poor Sasha. He just can't catch a break. *mwahahahaa*
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:iconjarrakul:
I love that one of them is Sasha. XD
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:iconvictorymon:
one of those moments when I looked at the comic and thought: hey, nice! upskirt!
then I looked at the rest of the group and had to remind myself: thats Sasha!
...poor guy, he dont look happy
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