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 This part was easily the most memorable thing about that episode for me.


Not my best, but since I had something down already I just did what I could for it.  I still don't like it, but it's something that got drawn.

The episode itself didn't stand out much, in my opinion.  I think the only other memorable part is how much of a speaking part Big McIntosh (that's how it's spelled, right? I don't really know.) had at the beginning.
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Sometimes dashing something off is better than fretting over it and overworking it. This is such a case. Indeed, the shadows and sky might be improved—the former are quite dark and the latter looks smoggy—but the picture’s immediate impact is charming and evocative.

The composition and “life” are good, with eye contact between the character, good diagonals connecting them, and visual balance across the image area. Applejack’s rear legs create a couple of tangents, but nothing terrible. Maybe AJ could look a little more exhausted, with bags under the eyes, but her confusion and woefulness come through well. Twilight’s emoting is spot-on.

The writing in the early episodes was a little shaky, I agree. They hadn’t gotten a firm handle on the characters’ personalities yet, and even more than that, they hadn’t zeroed in on the tone and feel that characterized later episodes.
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I am a huge My Little Pony fan and brony and a CRAZY fan of Twilight because of how much I love her and how beautiful she is! What makes this picture fantastic is it has a mix of warm colors, oranges, yellows, and reds, and cool colors, purples, blues, and greens. Twilight and Applejack become the center of of the image, making your eyes stick to them. The background sky, trees, and grass give you the feeling of summer or spring on a warm, cozy day.

Based on the pony girls's face expressions, you can easily tell this picture gives off a sense of goofiness and silliness. The wagon and three barrels of apples make you look at each one after another because of how neatly they're lined up. The bright, blue color of the sky leads your eyes down to the barrels of apples.
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herofan135 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, this one is really awesome!
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:iconnot-quite-lilac:
Not-Quite-Lilac Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2015
"Ah'm fine Twilight. But everything seems to've gotten itself upside-down somehow."
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:iconnoben:
Noben Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015   Digital Artist
That's funny. I read that totally in Apple Jack's voice. Your impersonations in my head are really good. X)
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TsunamiHolmes Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE YOUR ART SO MUCHHHHHHH!!!! I CAN'T GET OVER HOW BEAUTIFUL IT ISSSSS
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:iconrecoyote:
RECoyote Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
See that's why you use Four wheeled wagons
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DavidCurser Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
I know this scene. But compared to the other paintings this laggs of certain detail, or love for the detail. Twilights head, or more specific, her ear, looks quite weird. I think it's too big, so is her monsterous hoof.
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ArcadeFever Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're a monstrous hoof. 
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This piece of art is so wonderful!!! I have the nostalgia right now... :heart: :love: :heart:
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EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014
Very cute, love the way you draw them.
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utakubeta Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
and the LAST time we hear Bic Mac say anything until season 4!
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PonyMoog203A Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
This is perfect... I can't say more, only it's simply perfect...
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:iconjninelives:
JNinelives Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You got AJ's hair falling down there very nicely.
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silberhase Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
Your shading looks beautiful!
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DoughnutJoe Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
I'm really liking this series, and this is my favorite of the pieces you have done so far.
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:iconc-pancake:
C-Pancake Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's awesome! XD
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temporos Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think yours is my favourite FIM style.
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Neitronik Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
perfectamente! =D
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Sadakogi Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
I remember that episode!, It was the best :D
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MasterVule Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks great :D
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templar127 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
OHAI twilight!
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The-Packrat Featured By Owner Edited Sep 28, 2014
People are still drawing art of S1 episodes? And high-quality art at that? Wonderful!
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starmic Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
nice job inned
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fishofglass Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
Very Nice!
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NuvolaVolpe Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
:love:
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I-DigAPony Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love the style. The ears seem a bit large. When I imagine them speaking it has a lot of punch. Nice job for one you don't like.
Based on the style, I may well be contacting you for a commission, provided you do them.
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Samie-Seville Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
I think AppleJack needs help.
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Arancaytar Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
:icontwilightwhatplz: Need any help?

:iconapplejackproudplz: Got everything under control here.
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GrimCW Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
Back and in force! lol. 
Lovely as always, even if a bit "simpler" than your usual it still maintains the charm.

And yar, thats the proper spelling. Surprised no ones tried to claim is "Macintosh" yet.. So many people don't know that Macintosh is the computer apple, where Big Mac is named for the Mcintosh breed of fruit apple!
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Dark-Rat Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
Twilights horn looks a little...weird like it looks like a dick, cuz it bends...upwards....otherwise good picture.
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Starbat Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Such a cute style, and I love this scene.  It's almost nostalgic.  ;)
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Starbolt-81 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ma fave part of the episode too :D
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FralLeman Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
My favorite part of this episode...just watching her struggle upside down made me laugh.  Nice job!
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Atashi-Cloud Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is one of my absolute faves for Applejack. Sure, its probably her worst one considering how she acts in it, but I just love the can-do attitude she uses. Biggest reason I love this episode is because I tend to emulate that hard-working mentality a lot.
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A3Kitsune Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Nice.                                                                                                :twilightsparkle: :applejack: 
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Darkagumon2000 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
             twilight sparkle icon                            Applejack liar 
Do you need help Applejack?           Uh.....No.
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FoxTone Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ha loved that part, great job on the redraw.
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Dev-i Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
lol this scene
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The-S-H-A-D-O-W Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Eeyup!
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NovDecJan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
This was one of my favorite episodes 
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SimeonLeonard Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One of my favorite MLP moments. First time I've seen it in fan art. Nice!
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harwicks-art Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That was a great scene, and it works well in your style!
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Catspaw-DTP-Services Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Professional
Eyup, that’s the right spelling! And indeed, I think that’s the biggest speech he’s given in the entire series to date.
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Fixap Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
NICE!
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Rockbox1590 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your pony art! 
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Digoraccoon Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is an adorable piece of work you put together. The hair in AJ's made is nice done for her position.
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xonxt Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That really was an adorable scene. And unfortunately we haven't seen how she got down from that predicament - we only heard the sound.
Looks very cute, a good interpretation ;).
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CrystalHarmony Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Uh oh Apple Jack needs some help.
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Orca19904 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Too bad she's too stubborn to admit it in this instance.
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CrystalHarmony Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Yep
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